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I should write about Splinter, huh? 
9th-Nov-2012 02:12 pm
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I still haven't narrowed down what I'm going to write about it in my pro blog, which is less about my life and history. But I'll make a go of it here.

Wow, I just looked at the document and realized that it was published exactly a year to the day after I wrote it. That's a thing.


Almost every story I write comes from multiple seeds that seem unrelated, but collide in my head. Like temporal lobe epilepsy, quantum physics, a certain waiter, and a particular habit of Charles Fort's did to create "Valentines". In this case, there were two particular things.

The not-deeply-personal thing: At PiCon, in August 2011, I was on a panel about quests, and I mused that really, we don't often see what happens after the quest. We see a happy return to the everyday world, and we see that someone has gained Courage and Wisdom and Insight, but we don't see any negative effects, and we leave our adventurers immediately after, when they are oh so happy to be home. But what happens later? And what happens if things don't work?

The deeply-personal thing: If you've been reading me for any length of time, you know that I used to live in Vegas and have a deep attachment to it and its broken beauty. Every so often, when I'm in a particularly masochistic frame of mind, I google people I knew. Nine times out of ten I get an obituary. We were not living good lives back then; this is no surprise. I got out only because I got pregnant and had a flash of common sense. I left, in fact, the very day I found out I was pregnant. I lack closure big time. So I write about Vegas a lot.

In August of last year, for the first time in many years, I got a hit on Layne, my first love and possibly Elayna's birth-father (complicated timing and you can piece stuff together from my other posts). And it was his obituary.

I'd thought he was already dead a dozen times before. Rumors. I heard he'd ODed, I heard he'd been shot, and I had years between looking for anything under his name, because I just couldn't. So I honestly, at this point, did not think he had been alive for a bit. But he was.

And he had a family, a wife and stepkids.

And I... I had this unexpected surge of horrible grief, because once upon a time I loved him, and he is a huge part of a hugely important part of my life. But also, seeing the picture of him with his wife and kids, I thought, "I am not entitled to this grief. They lived with him for years, they were his family, I am a fragment - they lost a husband and a father. I lost a memory, a story I tell myself."

It took me a while to allow myself the grief.

He was theirs more. But he was important to me. And he was one of the last remnants of this incredibly intense, surreal, often terrible thing that has shaped my life.

So when I allowed myself to accept the emotions and not judge them, I got ambushed by story one day and sat down and wrote "Splinter" all in one surge, one violent outburst. I vomited forth - sorry for the imagery, but I had about that much control over the proceedings - this thing, this cry of pain and loneliness. I did it because no one else was left who knew.

And then I sat on it for months, because what is this thing? Who would want it?

I met Lynne and Michael Thomas of Apex Magazine at Wiscon this May, and we befriended each other on social media. So when, this June, I came across "Splinter" in my files and wondered aloud on Twitter who would want something so short, dark, twisty, whatever, they both told me to send it to them.

So I did.

And here it is.

People have asked why I'm shy about it; the thing is that I'm so close to it, and had so little conscious mind while writing it, that I completely lack any perspective on whether or not it works or is any good at all. So that's why.

So I wrote this thing.

Only some of the characters are based on anyone. Some of the things in it are things my friends did believe, or say they believed. I won't tell you which. Reads better that way.

Everything echoes.
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9th-Nov-2012 07:18 pm (UTC)
Everything echoes, in the damage left after, and in the hard-won strength.
10th-Nov-2012 02:43 am (UTC)
Reading that one hurt... now I know why. *hugs*
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