Magical Truthsaying Bastard Shadesong (shadesong) wrote,
Magical Truthsaying Bastard Shadesong
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Writing Katy's seduction banter is terribly fun - but a bit creepy, considering who she's seducing.

“Who are you?”

“I told you – no one of consequence.”

“Give me a name.”

“Give me a kiss.”


Also? I covet her dress.

Also also? I thought I was going to get to write non-creepy stuff today! St00pid writerbrain.

EDIT: And now I'm wondering what her safeword is, but I can't do my usual "write til stuff comes out" method, because she won't *use* it. Not with him.

Unrelated: Capri's is "hippo". I don't know why. It just is.

EDIT: Also also also? One of my characters has the wrong name. Dammit. I wanted Katy's twin brother to be named Alan after his father, Adam, but he insists on the name Thomas - which I tried to reject, because it means "twin". It is a name with no purpose to it save the support of his sister. What is he trying to tell me here?

ALSO EDIT: Oh, this is way more fucked up than I thought it was.

ALSO ALSO EDIT: And the scene that sparks their estrangement just poured out of my head and onto the keyboard. Holy shit, dude. No wonder there's a rift there now. Can't say as I blame him.
Tags: shayara, shayara.katy
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