“Who are you?”
“I told you – no one of consequence.”
“Give me a name.”
“Give me a kiss.”
Also? I covet her dress.
Also also? I thought I was going to get to write non-creepy stuff today! St00pid writerbrain.
EDIT: And now I'm wondering what her safeword is, but I can't do my usual "write til stuff comes out" method, because she won't *use* it. Not with him.
Unrelated: Capri's is "hippo". I don't know why. It just is.
EDIT: Also also also? One of my characters has the wrong name. Dammit. I wanted Katy's twin brother to be named Alan after his father, Adam, but he insists on the name Thomas - which I tried to reject, because it means "twin". It is a name with no purpose to it save the support of his sister. What is he trying to tell me here?
ALSO EDIT: Oh, this is way more fucked up than I thought it was.
ALSO ALSO EDIT: And the scene that sparks their estrangement just poured out of my head and onto the keyboard. Holy shit, dude. No wonder there's a rift there now. Can't say as I blame him.