Magical Truthsaying Bastard Shadesong (shadesong) wrote,
Magical Truthsaying Bastard Shadesong

I have a sentence that must die. But my brain is being Difficult about fixing it. So. Argh.

Have sent Take Three to my menfolk. Who think the Shawn story is great aside from the one sentence.

Would like someone who isn't schtupping me and who has read Shooting Star #6 to read the story, too, to make sure it makes sense; the problem with the menfolk, 'specially Adam, is that everything already makes sense to them.

I mean, I don't make sense. But it's perfectly logical why Shawn has this nightmare.

*glares at computer*

Imma go have a cookie.
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