I'm not entirely pleased with it, but I'm rarely entirely pleased with any of my work*. Still. I've spent too long fussing over it. It's up.
EDIT: And what I bloody well need to do, and soon, is give myself a chance to disappar into this work and fucking write, none of this dicking around with editing, and with prologues and stuff. I need to hear the voices again. On a regular basis.
*Except for issue #3 of Shayara, which I think is pretty good, and you can read that here.